Today in reading we did some questions about WW1. The questions were about the women in WW1 because our topic for this week is WW1. We had to make a DLO I used google drawings because I had to use something else that I haven't used for my previous questions. My favourite part was doing the questions, my least favourite part was nothing.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Riansha
ReplyDeleteI like how you did something different then what we normally do. It was nice to see that you added a picture of the women. Next time could you made it so the photos are smaller because they are going of the page and could you made it easier to read the words in the DLO.
- Carla
Hi Carla, thanks for the feedback!
DeleteHi Riansha
ReplyDeleteI liked how it was presented.
Maybe you could put more information in your sentences.
Hi Tane, thanks for the feedback I ill try to do that in the future!
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