In Science (Hurumanu T1-T2) we have been doing Science we watched a movie and filled in a sheet about the movie, the movie is about how Mark Watney survived on the planet Mars, on our sheet we had to write what happened first after then and last and we predicted what will happen at the bottom of my sheet there is a box saying "did any of your predictions come true?" yes my prediction was how Mark Watney survived on Mars, so yes my predictions were true.
Heres a little bit about of the movie: Mark Watney got trapped on Mars so he found something to communicate back on earth and he survived and got back to Earth safely.
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Riansha!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your first Hurumanu blog post. I enjoyed reading your recount of the movie. My only bit of feedback is to make sure you end your post with a full stop or other sentence ending punctuation. You could also try adding a photo or video to make your post stand out!
- Miss Birtch
Thanks Miss Birtch
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