I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
My name is Jade F and I will be working with your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme this summer break.
Awesome work on your haiku post! I thought your structure of your haiku was excellent and you used the right amount of syllables for each line very well. Good choice in words. I really like the image you used as a background as well, it really helped me with trying to figure out what you were describing in your poem which I’m guessing is a cheetah? Am I correct?
I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here. Copy the link below into your URL bar https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!
Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer! https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi there Riansha
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jade F and I will be working with your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme this summer break.
Awesome work on your haiku post! I thought your structure of your haiku was excellent and you used the right amount of syllables for each line very well. Good choice in words. I really like the image you used as a background as well, it really helped me with trying to figure out what you were describing in your poem which I’m guessing is a cheetah? Am I correct?
I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here. Copy the link below into your URL bar
https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds
You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!
Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer!
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Jade F :)
It is not a cheetah it is a phanther good try Jade.f thank you for the idvice.
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